part twenty five

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[(Anonymous)]

Title: Subject to Change (lol is that the title or the fourth wall)
Fandom and Pairing: Infinite; Myungsoo-centric

I don't understand the extended metaphor. I can see you try for it, but the large chunky paragraph (which isn't bad in itself) doesn't relate well to the central idea overall. FOr example, you set up the picture-taking and you set up the skipping pebbles image then abandon it in the next sentence and that fragmentation weakens both understanding and coherency.

That's not to say subtlety isn't good; subtlety can often be more meaningful in the end because it invites the reader to form their own judgments. I like that you don't equte subtlety with purple prose (but by all means, evoke something pretty if you have a purpose for doing so). Experiments can work wonderfully and less wonderfully. This wasn't so bad, all in all.

I may read the other two tomorrow because I have to go now. Haha. Hope I helped.

[(Anonymous)]

haha.

[(Anonymous)]

what

[(Anonymous)]

nothing, you said haha, i said haha~

[(Anonymous)]

in that case i say byul

[(Anonymous)]

buing buing~ ^^

[(Anonymous)]

.....sorry i realised this wasn't as specific as it could have been. tiredness can do that oops? yea this was basically a series of thoughts because there's only so much you can pick a drabble apart.

[(Anonymous)]

❤ yes this definitely helped
thank you so much anon