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part twenty three
POSTING THE NAMES AND ADDRESSES OF USERS IS A SERIOUS TOS VIOLATION. PLEASE DON'T DO IT
kficanon fic exchange
kpop ficmix
POSTING THE NAMES AND ADDRESSES OF USERS IS A SERIOUS TOS VIOLATION. PLEASE DON'T DO IT
kficanon fic exchange
kpop ficmix
http://pixel-dicks.tumblr.com/post/33069682739
oh gosh i love this kid so much e___e
nsfw btw
oh gosh i love this kid so much e___e
nsfw btw
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(Anonymous) 2012-10-20 06:17 pm (UTC)(link)one thing jonghyun picked up from sherlock? ridiculous body waves.
crying, i'm reading this terrible fic on AFF and Shindong is the name of a restaurant.
exo's fanboy club president is a qt
anons please go have sex and stop being horny for jonghyun
1 – This is good, no doubt. I like your wording and the little twist of the ending – I felt it like a little jab to my stomach. I do feel there is a little too much (unnecessary) talking, but in one way it all brings something to the atmosphere, so I guess it’s just a matter of taste.
2 – This (sort-of) works. Your writing is good, I really liked the expression “bare feet pounding the sidewalk” although I would personally have used “teeth” rather than “incisors” which can sound a bit pretentious and odd. This isn’t a big story with a deep point, but I can take it for what it is. Although I’m not sure I like how you set the story, like what scenes to use to tell it, (and I think the end needs to be stronger,) it’s still a cute drabble.
3 – Oh god, I really really liked this one. You have such an interesting choice of words, something I personally appreciate immensely. Your writing feels so natural and well-fitting, and I think I have an idea of who you are haha. As overused as the clone theme might be, you still had me on pins and needles and I could not see the twist coming until the very last line. This was really well done, and the summary & title really complement the drabble. But I still wonder, why were there two of them in the first place? And why isn’t Myungsoo the one staying if Myungsoo is the one the fans prefer, regardless of who the original was? Just two minor flaws to an amazing drabble.
4 – My instinctive reaction is that this would work as an intro to a longer fic, but doesn’t really work as an independent drabble. I don’t like the careless addition of the incestual theme, I know that it’s popular in fic but here it only seems like an attempt to be edgy and attract attention. I guess, my problem is that you’re not really telling a story, and you’re not really catching a snapshot of a scene either. It seems unfinished, like the punchline was cut off. But that’s limited wordcount for ya, and ik drabbles are hard. Your writing is still good, your words and sentences flow well even if I wish you had had more to say.
2 – This (sort-of) works. Your writing is good, I really liked the expression “bare feet pounding the sidewalk” although I would personally have used “teeth” rather than “incisors” which can sound a bit pretentious and odd. This isn’t a big story with a deep point, but I can take it for what it is. Although I’m not sure I like how you set the story, like what scenes to use to tell it, (and I think the end needs to be stronger,) it’s still a cute drabble.
3 – Oh god, I really really liked this one. You have such an interesting choice of words, something I personally appreciate immensely. Your writing feels so natural and well-fitting, and I think I have an idea of who you are haha. As overused as the clone theme might be, you still had me on pins and needles and I could not see the twist coming until the very last line. This was really well done, and the summary & title really complement the drabble. But I still wonder, why were there two of them in the first place? And why isn’t Myungsoo the one staying if Myungsoo is the one the fans prefer, regardless of who the original was? Just two minor flaws to an amazing drabble.
4 – My instinctive reaction is that this would work as an intro to a longer fic, but doesn’t really work as an independent drabble. I don’t like the careless addition of the incestual theme, I know that it’s popular in fic but here it only seems like an attempt to be edgy and attract attention. I guess, my problem is that you’re not really telling a story, and you’re not really catching a snapshot of a scene either. It seems unfinished, like the punchline was cut off. But that’s limited wordcount for ya, and ik drabbles are hard. Your writing is still good, your words and sentences flow well even if I wish you had had more to say.
ugh mod could have just posted the last ficmix yesterday so we can be done with this
lmao exo k's a girl group
ice cream doesn't sound as campy as i was hoping it would =/
ugh so flawless
tbh there are few kpop people that i find ugly. they're idols, obviously they're going to be good looking. i actually find it quite ridiculous how anons throw around words like fug and groce when the people that they're insulting are most likely quite attractive
how do you tell if someone got botox? i've heard the pained smile/stiff face but i never pick up on that unless someone points it out
i still have hopes for suho to look good again o/
anyone has the link to do dream with dbsk with subs?
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ecbL8W0vV18
weeps, these children
weeps, these children
some seouldout elimination reasons leave me so pressed lol
i'm not mod or anything, jw because after seeing this round i would like to participate in the next one. jw if there would be a bigger or smaller turn out next time around.
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(Anonymous) 2012-10-20 10:50 pm (UTC)(link)http://25.media.tumblr.com/tumblr_m8hgzpTVxo1rclb2io1_500.gif
i want colorfunk to continue her hulk!chanyeol :(
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