part thirty nine

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#11, yesung/kyuhyun

[(Anonymous)]

one thing i liked about this remix was that the remixer added the roman numerals to help the reader figure out non-chronological order of the scenes. at first i found the order strange and jarring, but as i read on i got used to it and really enjoyed it. i like how this story expanded on the original, fleshed out the emotions and really drove the original feelings home. the repeated use of the state of the roses as a symbol of the state of their relationship felt a bit heavy-handed. using it less would have had more of an impact, in my opinion.

the writing was solid and the story held much the same appeal as the original. overall, pretty good!

Re: #11, yesung/kyuhyun

[(Anonymous)]

ot but please keep up the awesome work. i love reading your fic thoughts :*

Re: #11, yesung/kyuhyun

[(Anonymous)]

ty sweet anon :*