do you think it would be more constructive to ask like "give a specific thing that could've been improved in this fic" or something? that way it would be kind of hard to tear apart the entire fic....
:\ maybe just post your fic to your journal and ask for crit there. then if you really want to give crit, leave a note on the kfa comm asking if the recipient/writer are okay with getting crit, i guess. some people really aren't comfortable with getting gifts criticised.
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