kficanon ([personal profile] kficanon) wrote2012-09-22 10:59 am

part fifteen



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Re: itt: strengths and weaknesses

(Anonymous) 2012-09-22 03:40 am (UTC)(link)
strengths: grammatically correct, decent dialogue

weaknesses: boring, bad plot, bad transitions

i'm not sure where i stand characterization wise because i put so much thought into but i'm not sure how well it comes across, if at all.