why does her fics always start with one huge ass paragraph, followed by a dozen more huge ass paragraphs? don't get me wrong, i appreciate thorough and detailed explorations of each scene, but sometimes the length of each paragraph is so unnecessarily long that the story ends up looking like blocks of texts instead of a cohesive whole.
da honestly i like her writing a lot but visually i have trouble reading big paragraphs so i can't get through very much of it. i would have to read so slow that a 90k+ fic would take weeks, lol. i wish she still wrote a lot of shorter pieces that had more paragraph breaks because i really liked them
i don't think she's a bad writer at all and this is clearly how she likes to write but as a reader i can't do it. way too much detail, the plot moves at a snail's pace for it.
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