i remember canttakeabreath having some good ones (at least i think it was her. there was a taoris piercing kink one and i think a taoris breathplay one? idk, it was years ago). but she locked all her fics
ok my disclaimer is that my eyes tend to glaze over their dialogue anyway but i have reread the epilogue of the wedding planner au a lot and the sex scene in the blind!jimin/rapmon fic is surprisingly well-done
dda, lmao, this might be weird and i don't know anything about sex (i'm ace), but my problem with her sex scenes is that sometimes it feels like you read more about the character's inner thought than the 'action' itself (there are other writers i feel the same way) and know i can't help but wonder if people actually think that much during sex? I somehow can't imagine it, but idk...
i think her scenes can get a little wordy but it's hard to find a balance between just straight action after action and involving thoughts and feelings.
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