yeah i'm debating on whether to put things like this bec sometimes it is purely self-indulgent and has no plot, and you might wanna point out that you're aware of this. then again pointing it out will bring the attention to the lack of plot when people might not have thought about it before. i think over-all, as far as possible, let the story stand for itself, bec it's probably enjoyable despite its flaws
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