i don't know big bang very well but i can be brutally honest :D unless you're looking for characterization-type insight, because my comments would be more about how i see it within the story.
that's fine. i'm more worried about the writing itself. omg i'm so excited for someone to be honest with me. thank you. ;; do you want to exchange emails??
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(Anonymous) 2013-09-06 12:20 am (UTC)(link)i need someone to be like, really brutally honest with me. the last couple of betas i had never seemed to be able to do that... i need real concrit.
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