part thirty nine

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#7, sehun/kai

[(Anonymous)]

very sweet! a little on the predictable side, but it's enjoyable nonetheless. the writing is very good, the author paces the story well (i was worried when i saw 5200w, but none of it felt unnecessary). the way the author brings in other members doesn't feel forced. they actually play roles in the story. my only point of criticism would be the title because i don't think the song does the story justice.

Re: #7, sehun/kai

[(Anonymous)]

the beginning threw me off because it was a little too much on the cutesy side. the scenes after that were lovely! ending felt a little too corny and slightly rushed, because confessions??? in public??? as idols??? what??? but that's probably because i'm cynical.

Re: #7, sehun/kai

[(Anonymous)]

ia on both counts. i've come to expect slightly unrealistic things to happen in this kind of cute, fight-then-get-together fics, but you're totally right.

Re: #7, sehun/kai

[(Anonymous)]

i think i give fics like this a little leeway too, simply because there are /too many/ cutesy fics that are concluded like so and i'm just sad because this fic actually had a lot of potential.