the premise to this fic was interesting but it definitely felt rushed. the original reason why sunye had been kept inside was never explained, which i suppose might be an interesting choice but this fic felt too bare-bones as it was. considering she'd been afraid of the outside her whole life, i sincerely doubt she'd decide to go outside after meeting donghae three times.

had good potential, but it felt like a lot of important stuff was missing. a decently enjoyable read nonetheless.