da actually it seems like most of the original authors have commented on their fics, but there are some who just haven't commented on the remixes at all.
/o\ ok so it's for this prompt (http://kprompts.livejournal.com/2031.html?thread=55279#t55279) which i prompted (/o\) but later decided to have a go at myself (tho ofc i'd still want someone else to write it for me as well lmao) and basically they're pretentious middle-class kids who think they're badass because they listen to sex pistols and wear black (bec rly gongchan what real punker would wear a shirt like that) although frankly they probably spend more time listening to the tapes in chanshik's secret box under his bed that he recorded off the hitlist radio stations than the strenuously obtained punk records on open display in his bookcase. ig it's all basically an excuse for them to separate themselves from the ""mainstream""" (as a method of handling an already existing feeling of alienation (wow this sounds deeper than it is)) or w/e and since they're (quite proudly) the only punks in the village so to speak, they keep to themselves and it's just the two of them so they develop a strong bond ig. and then ~become more than friends~. (honestly i have no plot)
i liked this story quite a bit! the original fic was a very interesting choice and i liked what the remixer did with it. though the writing had some awkward spots, i was able to get through the whole thing with little problem. it made me laugh out loud (quietly 'cause i'm at work mind you), and that's definitely a good thing.
like the anon on the other page, i ended up skimming this one, at least at the beginning. i really enjoyed the au. it was an interesting spin and the remixer incorporated the events of the original story (or, well, scene) into it well. the dialogue was fun and the characterization felt natural. overall. very enjoyable!
okay so i really tried but i got about a third of the way through and had to give up. the author's writing is interesting, but all of the flowery language and details make it really dense and the pace was too slow for me. i just couldn't get into it.
anyone else who got through all of it have thoughts?
an interesting premise, but the author's note once again was detrimental because it drew attention to how rushed the story was. the emotions of the story fell flat because the author relief too much on telling. On that day, two boys each realize that the other is beautiful. this line might sound nice and poetic, but it deflated all of the nice details beforehand which showed basically what this line summed up. it was nicely whimsical until the end. why so sad, remixer?
this was so good!! i haven't enjoyed a b1a4 fic in a really long time. i adored the characterization of all of the boys, but especially chansik. i think the author did a great job telling a side story to the original and making it their own. the whole thing was just perfect, from chansik hating his superhero name to junghwan failing at life and the two of them meeting in person and junghwan not even realizing it.
i was a little wary of the stageplay format, but this author really pulled it off! the dialogue was funny and the story a little ridiculous, but in a good way. i really enjoyed reading and imagining the actual play performed.
a nicely written exploration of kris' personality, or rather his multiple personas. a lot of it was a bit generic, meaning it could be applied to several idols who struggle with their 'real' personalities vs. their idol personas, but the author does a good job of making kris' situation unique by explaining how he has four personas, and each of them has a very specific role. there was enough specific detail to make it work. as someone who's admired his face from afar, i liked learning a little about him.
this felt very anticlimactic. considering the story's about a taboo relationship, the author didn't include much about the taboo at all beyond mentioning that chansik was aware of it. the ending didn't leave much of an impression on me.
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