that's not a suggestion, and saying something has a "cop out resolution" is not concrit. previous to that, even when an anon called her writing "pretentious," she said, "i will agree with you; i didn't put heart into bloodstream and tried to make it seem like i did, so viola!
sorry if this seems a bit harsh, because i really do enjoy a lot of your work! hence why i only have something very specific to point out. no worries, that's what concrit's for! and thank you <33"
but someone did suggest on how to write something that didn't read so loose/poetic, in case she ever wanted to write general fic or whatever? didn't they? i'm just a passing anon, so correct me if i'm wrong.
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(Anonymous) 2012-12-12 06:33 am (UTC)(link)http://anonfeedback.livejournal.com/526.html?thread=177934#t177934
that's not a suggestion, and saying something has a "cop out resolution" is not concrit. previous to that, even when an anon called her writing "pretentious," she said, "i will agree with you; i didn't put heart into bloodstream and tried to make it seem like i did, so viola!
sorry if this seems a bit harsh, because i really do enjoy a lot of your work! hence why i only have something very specific to point out.
no worries, that's what concrit's for!
and thank you <33"
that doesn't sound like dismissal to me
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