thank you! i'm amazed and pleased that you got that level of image from that sentence :D and yes this is part 2 out of 7 that i have planned, for some reason i finished it before the first part (i guess i like to write about smoking u__u)
i can only hope that more people will join in writing them! they have a lot of potential.
Re: french inhale, june 2008 (hoyeol)
(Anonymous) 2012-12-07 01:37 am (UTC)(link)He remembers Hoya's pinky finger resting against his mouth, the smoke that was more like a breath with its damp heat, like shower steam.
really vivid, and i can totally picture hoya's short, stubby pinky against the pretty bow shape of sungyeol's upper lip... very nice detail. :3
yay for someone actually writing hoyeol!! \o/
Re: french inhale, june 2008 (hoyeol)
(Anonymous) 2012-12-07 02:21 am (UTC)(link)i can only hope that more people will join in writing them! they have a lot of potential.