kficanon ([personal profile] kficanon) wrote2012-11-24 03:13 pm

part thirty two



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(Anonymous) 2012-11-25 05:56 am (UTC)(link)
"____ did ____ on a (insert day of the week)."

if this is the first line of your fic, i am not going to bother reading the rest, just saying.

(Anonymous) 2012-11-25 06:01 am (UTC)(link)
why?

(Anonymous) 2012-11-25 06:03 am (UTC)(link)
because it's overused, tryhard, and 99% of the time completely extraneous and unnecessary.

(Anonymous) 2012-11-25 06:08 am (UTC)(link)
da how is this tryhard? it seems pretty normal to me

(Anonymous) 2012-11-25 06:12 am (UTC)(link)
because it's intended to sound insightful but actually is saying absolutely nothing of importance. it's a wet sock of a first sentence and would be cut by any editor worth their salt.

(Anonymous) 2012-11-25 06:22 am (UTC)(link)
but most kfics don't... get run through editors...

(Anonymous) 2012-11-25 06:23 am (UTC)(link)
and so would an excessive description about the color of the bookshelves, right?

(Anonymous) 2012-11-25 06:23 am (UTC)(link)
da and lmao anon

(Anonymous) 2012-11-25 06:01 am (UTC)(link)
lol i think one of my fav exo fic started with this line.

(Anonymous) 2012-11-25 06:01 am (UTC)(link)
anon did sehun on a tuesday night.

(Anonymous) 2012-11-25 07:38 am (UTC)(link)
reading