straightforward, action-based sentences alternating with sensory description. when it gets too caught up in keeping the pronouns straight or trying to find different words for the same body parts it loses me
i like smut where the characters fuck like they have all day. so plenty of teasing, foreplay, and a bit of orgasm denial. and also if they are screamers.
i like it slow, and i like sensory details! i like dirty talk but only if it works for the characters, so usually lay off. i'm a sucker for any description of noises people make, the more desperate the better.
i like it when sounds are described, whether the sounds made during sex or people moaning/gasping/etc. also really really well-crafted dirty talk, a lot of emphasis on the visual and sensory aspects. waxing lyrical turns me off
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(Anonymous) 2012-11-20 07:06 am (UTC)(link)i mean sex is a sensory experience so