i actually like grate because there's some lovely onomatopoeia to the word! to say grate sounds like you're grating something, because of the hard gr- and the sharp t noise. but ia completely with purge and moist. moist moist moist ughhhhhhhhhh
this is op aka mushroom the magician and I replied rather embarrassingly to your fic... I'm really sorry that I haven't replied earlier, I'm doing overtime at work as we speak :(
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