part twenty five

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[(Anonymous)]

da and i've written fic 2nd person and lapslock (and both) before, and i don't think any of those stylistic choices are necessarily bad? i'm reading through the fic now and ia with the anon that replied below you; the imagery becomes almost purple at times and that obfuscates a lot of the meaning. if the author had cleaned it up and tightened/streamlined the metaphors it would've read a lot easier. and the idea is nice but i feel like something closer to minimalism would've suited the content of the story much more.

[(Anonymous)]

obfuscates unf

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[(Anonymous)]

written fic in*** 2nd person and lapslock, gdi