i admit that fics like this don't do much for me. i'm not into overly flowery and metaphorical writing in my fanfiction. the writing was good, though the author mentioned they kept a lot of the original words which has me skeptical. i would be interested to know how similar it is to the original, so anyone feel free to fill me in. once i read the remix i honestly didn't want to read the original because i'm not a fan of the style. i honestly can't say much about this one but i'm sure plenty of people who are into this kind of writing will like it.