this is another case of awkward writing, but it's not bad enough to detract from the story. it just wasn't the smoothest, and some of the word choice was a bit confusing. wanton noodles made me chuckle but it was a very minor mistake. I have a strange sense of humor. in the second half of the first part there's a random section where the author switched to present tense and i don't get that decision at all.

in general i'm not a fan of stalker-turned-friend/lover stories. kai just plain seems like an ass in this and i don't get at all why do is into him beyond his looks, which seems like such a shallow reason considering he's already in a relationship. and then kai is doing drugs? and suho planned for them to get together? and then kai fucking kills himself? the story took such a strange turn in the second part.