thank you! i can't name any examples off the top of my head but it's definitely possible to write an almost invisible limited POV. some 1st person novels even manage this. though it's something i struggle with so maybe that's why i notice it more.

this doesn't seem like a pennylane fic - they're usually... ramblier - but then i haven't read her work in months so what do i know! ia completely with you and da's observations though lmao