i'm not saying that criticism can't be opinion? it's not constructive because they aren't giving her advice on how to improve. there's "your writing is pretentious" and then there's "your writing is more focused on style than narrative. have you considered writing something more plot-driven to challenge yourself? i feel like that would make your story telling stronger." i don't understand why anons always take "crit" as an excuse to be rude, because in the end, you're still talking to be a real person.