kficanon ([personal profile] kficanon) wrote2012-11-30 11:48 am
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part thirty four



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Re: french inhale, june 2008 (hoyeol)

(Anonymous) 2012-12-07 01:51 am (UTC)(link)
wow this is perfect. this is the hoyeol i have burned for, this is everything i want fic to be and anon this is just really really really really good. i love the scene you've described here, and the way you've done it. i love sungyeol stealing the cigarette, him giving it up to hoya for the pixelated photo, and that moment where they smoke through their hands is probably one of the hottest things i've ever read in kfic. i normally get bored by the "oh no i'm turned on by my friend i'm going to go for a quick wank" but you did it so well here, so poignantly and i love how sungyeol doesn't think about it on purpose. i love how realistic it feels when he jacks off, and then cleans his hands and then rubs it over his face and then gargles with shower water and spits, because i can see that happening. you have a fascinating and absolutely lovely narrative eye. really looking forward to reading the other 6 parts *_____*

Re: french inhale, june 2008 (hoyeol)

(Anonymous) 2012-12-07 02:26 am (UTC)(link)
anon, oh my goodness ;~; i'm so glad this worked for you, hoyeol-wise and otherwise! and that it came out realistic and avoided cliches even with the setup. i will work hard on the rest for you~

Re: french inhale, june 2008 (hoyeol)

(Anonymous) 2012-12-07 02:37 am (UTC)(link)
i can't wait! how long do you think you'll take to finish + will you be posting onto dd?

Re: french inhale, june 2008 (hoyeol)

(Anonymous) 2012-12-07 02:44 am (UTC)(link)
yep, it'll be on dd! tbh i'm not sure how long it'll take for me to finish the whole thing, but i've decided to post it in chapters once i'm done the third part (because i'm impatient/have been talking this up and don't want to take forever), so that should be sometime before the end of the month. please anticipate~

Re: french inhale, june 2008 (hoyeol)

(Anonymous) 2012-12-07 02:57 am (UTC)(link)
*______________* many anticipating feelings!!! gl anon \o/
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